Comments on: Leo http://www.rapideyereality.com/archives/2008/09/04/leo/ Personal blog of Brad "Otis" Willis, writer, traveler, amateur photographer, and family man Wed, 10 Mar 2010 16:06:53 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: DaGoddess.com » PROMPTuesday #21 - A Story About A Friend http://www.rapideyereality.com/archives/2008/09/04/leo/comment-page-1/#comment-16773 DaGoddess.com » PROMPTuesday #21 - A Story About A Friend Wed, 10 Sep 2008 15:23:59 +0000 http://www.rapideyereality.com/?p=1160#comment-16773 [...] while he’s not a Prompter, please go read the Fabulous Otis’ Leo. Filed under: Bloggy, Friends, Life, The Well [...] [...] while he’s not a Prompter, please go read the Fabulous Otis’ Leo. Filed under: Bloggy, Friends, Life, The Well [...]

]]> By: Golden http://www.rapideyereality.com/archives/2008/09/04/leo/comment-page-1/#comment-16183 Golden Fri, 05 Sep 2008 20:29:11 +0000 http://www.rapideyereality.com/?p=1160#comment-16183 I like your story so far. Your a good writer. Can I give my theory on what was in the water? I think it was the same thing/ same guy you wrote about at the 2007 WSOP. You remember don't ya? The guy in black who could make eye contact with you from 2 blocks away. Yeah, I'm sure that is what is in the water. I like your story so far. Your a good writer. Can I give my theory on what was in the water? I think it was the same thing/ same guy you wrote about at the 2007 WSOP. You remember don’t ya? The guy in black who could make eye contact with you from 2 blocks away. Yeah, I’m sure that is what is in the water.

]]> By: Da Goddess http://www.rapideyereality.com/archives/2008/09/04/leo/comment-page-1/#comment-16081 Da Goddess Thu, 04 Sep 2008 20:18:14 +0000 http://www.rapideyereality.com/?p=1160#comment-16081 Absolute genius. Brief, but perfect. Absolute genius. Brief, but perfect.

]]> By: Dr. Chako http://www.rapideyereality.com/archives/2008/09/04/leo/comment-page-1/#comment-16075 Dr. Chako Thu, 04 Sep 2008 18:31:51 +0000 http://www.rapideyereality.com/?p=1160#comment-16075 The hallmark of a good short story? Character development intertwined with a loose plot followed by a right hook that at first seems stark but (of course) ties it all in. Well done, as usual. -DrC The hallmark of a good short story? Character development intertwined with a loose plot followed by a right hook that at first seems stark but (of course) ties it all in.

Well done, as usual.

-DrC

]]> By: betty http://www.rapideyereality.com/archives/2008/09/04/leo/comment-page-1/#comment-16063 betty Thu, 04 Sep 2008 16:47:34 +0000 http://www.rapideyereality.com/?p=1160#comment-16063 Gold. Pure gold. It would be a shame if you didn't take this further. Tell more of the story.. please! Gold. Pure gold. It would be a shame if you didn’t take this further. Tell more of the story.. please!

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